Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Giants

I've been struggling a bit lately, but thanks to Robert Lee Brewer and his website, I was inspired to write this. It helps of course that we recently took a trip to Yosemite National Park (one of the most beautiful places in the world).  The prompt was to write a poem from the prospective of a "group", people, animals, organisms, inanimate objects etc. I immediately thought of the giant redwoods in the Mariposa Grove. So here it is.




Giants

Only the wind knows
The secrets we have hidden
Deep within our cores.
Whispering to the breeze, we reach
To the sky and scrape the clouds

Until tears begin
To fall down. Down to the ground
Seeping into roots,
They are drawn up through our souls
Quenching every last needle,

Delivering life
As we spread our branches wide
And embrace the sun,
Watching over the world with
Eagles and angels alike.


Caren E. Salas

4 comments:

  1. Whispering to the breeze, we reach
    To the sky and scrape the clouds

    my favorite line. Very elegant poem.

    Yosemite is amazing.

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  2. oh i like the reaching to the sky and scraping the clouds..this has a majestic feeling as has the photo..beautiful

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  3. nice...so much to gleen from trees...esp when it comes to spirituality...

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