I wanted to write something simple and calming for this one, and decided to do a haiku. I started out with this one:
Evening quiet comes
With a kind of tranquil peace
Like whispering leaves.
(For those of you who know me, try not to barf - SO not me.) I ended up going toward something a little more dramatic. The problem is, that it ended up having a hint of an old TV commercial. (Listen for it - you know what I'm talking about.) Oh well...
Evening quiet screams
In my ears like a nightmare
And I can't wake up.
Caren E. Salas
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